Zack Smith - Student (Remake)

I remade this because I felt it lacked detail, and since I couldn't edit the first one, I had to remake it.

Full Name: Zackary Oak Smith

Gender: Male

Age: 15

Occupation: Student

Clique (Not Required if They're an Adult) : Non-clique

Orientation: Bisexual

Appearance: Zack has brown hair in a 'shaggy' style. He has hazel eyes and wears a dark green non-clique vest, his undershirt untucked and sleeves rolled up. Further down he wears stonewashed jeans and dark grey combat boots. He has a white watch on his right wrist. In the winter, he trades the vest for a Bullworth hoodie. On Halloween, he goes as Batman.

History: In spite of growing up in the rough neighborhood of Blue Skies, Zack never succumbed to joining a gang, or breaking any major law, although he did have his fair share of fights. When his brother, who was also his best friend, started showing signs of mental disturbance, he became concerned. When the murder of his mother and execution of his father occurred when they were both 7, he was, to say the least, scarred. However, this granted him a much more realistic and mature outlook on life. And although those around him began to act differently - namely his brother, who became a bully - he stayed the way he was. Being bullied throughout middle school, he decides in his Sophomore year to take a stand for himself and others.

Personality: Zack was never a 'mean' or 'cruel' person, like people interpret him to be because of his family (he did grow up with a mentally disturbed older brother, a drunk mother and racist abusive father after all). He is mature for his age, although he can get a little over-agitated. He is quick to stand up to others. Zack is very friendly, to those he is friends with. To others, who he does not know, he can be somewhat shy. He holds a grudge against Bullies and Jocks, being a longtime victim of them.

Photograph (my profile picture is the best, here is another) :

Looks fine to me. Thanks for remaking your post.